psst... write more. please[: and you need to teach me how to put stories up on this again d:

That was slightly confusing. I think a few bits and pieces could have been worded a little better, but it doesn't matter. Nothing's perfect _

YOu should defiantely continue it. Lol, but that's what I say about everything I read. Simply because I don't think any piece of writing is 'bad' - I can always see the good pointers behind all the stuff that jsut needs to be improved.

So yea, I hope you get some reviews and choose to continue. That'd be good. :D