|Reviews for Untouched by time, Concealed by Beauty|
| nicky landry 8/9/10 . chapter 1
psst... write more. please[: and you need to teach me how to put stories up on this again d:
| Black Sparrow 10/31/09 . chapter 1
That was slightly confusing. I think a few bits and pieces could have been worded a little better, but it doesn't matter. Nothing's perfect _
YOu should defiantely continue it. Lol, but that's what I say about everything I read. Simply because I don't think any piece of writing is 'bad' - I can always see the good pointers behind all the stuff that jsut needs to be improved.
So yea, I hope you get some reviews and choose to continue. That'd be good. :D