You better update this! It's awesomely angsty!

I can see this becoming something quite deep with emotions if you were to continue it. If you get the urge to, please follow it :)
It's part of human nature to want something in return. It's human nature to be selfish. We can't help it, right? It's just the way we turned out.
Great piece - keep writing.

To lazy to log in but omg u gotta continue this its very good and angsty ;) and angst pwns