perfect! i absolutely adore this! it's so beautiful and heartbreaking and the kind of poem you want to copy&paste to microsoft word and print it and then paste it again on your notebook.. lol.. and i think i'm in love with you..

i heart you to pieces!
~tiara♥

i love the diction in this piece and the song-like quality that it has to it. it was an interesting read.

i am awed.

this sent a tingle down my spine, because it's just so true.
it's just so true.

heart wrenching.

"like it didn't matter (and) they stared, they stared but
it was okay because i didn't care, i didn't care
yeah i'm sure i knew i never cared." these were my favorite lines but the whole piece was just brilliant.
+favorite

I don't even know what to say but this is seriously one of the best pieces I have read on this site in awhile. I read it like three times before I decided to review and it's not like I have anything super smart to say, I just like it so much and thought it deserved something more than a spot on my favorites list. I loved your word choice. Awesome, awesome job. :)

i just think you should know that your poetry makes my heart ache from where it has slipped down into my throat, makes my eyes greedy for the words & my hand greedy for a pen, makes me keep trying to grasp the words that are always a bit over my head.

...

just thought you should know.

"when i was a
girl i guess loneliness didn't taste like barbed wire and fear,
and i didn't wonder how the hell i'd got here because
it was okay not to know, it was okay to have nowhere to go"
beautiful, this entire piece was breath taking.