|Reviews for Too Long|
| Addicted 1/25/11 . chapter 56
This story is so good. i'm excited for the sequel but i don't want to read it until its complete. Why doesn't jess have a nickname? my email is .
| Lawmpy 7/8/10 . chapter 56
I just saw this, too, when I was randomly looking at the reviews for this.
I love you, too. Stop by for a tea party any time. Thanks for letting us do the spoof on this too, hon.
Again, I love you.
| o0-flying high-0o 7/7/10 . chapter 56
I love you too.
And I totally didn't see this chapter until now. But, since I've been pouring over it of late...
And also, your story is still brilliant after several read throughs and trying to work with it.
| Random Girl A.K.A. Nobody 3/17/10 . chapter 4
O.O WHY HAVEN'T I READ THIS SOONER! Why did you kill Ranting!
| Jess 1/26/10 . chapter 55
You killed me! How dare you. And Pyro and Jeremy didn't die. And then you brought me back to life just so you could have Nick and me fluff. You suck sometimes Mariah. You really do. I do like the whole poking scene and "Yay she's dead. Let's drink Pina Coladas." I can see you doing this in real life. Okay I'm calm now and I promise that I won't kill you tomorrow or even plot your death. (Until you do something else that is.)
Oh and thanks GermanSam. Wicked Witch? Funny.
| GermanSam 1/26/10 . chapter 55
Ah the wicked witch isn't dead so I shouldn't be celebrating.
Hm...maybe they need to throw some water on her to see if she melts?
Anyway, sequel really?
How is that going to work?
Are they going to be out of high school?
Will they actually have money?
Will they be above the drinking age?
Knowing you I bet most of these answers are "No" or "you'll have to find out".
Whatever I guess I'll find out eventually...
| GermanSam 1/26/10 . chapter 54
Gosh I have to wait a whole 15 seconds to review! *mummbles* Stupid rules... *done mummbling*
I knew you would not kill Jeremy but the Pyro thing was a little unexpected but fluff is fluff.
I quote: " I wished that Miles was still around for Fishy."
lol since you considered actually doing it, you had to include that right?
Also I liked the poking, very realistic...well for me anyway.
It's what I'd do if I though someone was dead.
| GermanSam 1/26/10 . chapter 53
Wow, so like I said before in class, it was all so easy!
Bang and whoop she's down and dead! I mean come on! Someone should have done that like ages ago!
And poor Tilly doesn't know that she's setting herself up to get herself killed.
Ah three chapters in one day...what is comming over you?
Is it contagious?
OMG stay away from me! (
| o0-flying high-0o 1/26/10 . chapter 55
It's... over. Sort of. Well, this part at least.
It was brilliant, I loved it. I'm glad Jeremy and Pyro didn't die after everything. And I really hope this means there's a sequel in the not too distant future...
| SilverMoonArcher 1/25/10 . chapter 12
Oh my god; I was reading this in the living room when the front door opened suddenly and with a loud noise. I yelped and turned to the door only to see my mom walking in. I thought "Holy crap."
Well, I guess that's a compliment to your story in itself.
| Lawmpy 1/25/10 . chapter 55
This was just. . . . epic and awesome in pretty much every way. I adored it utterly. That Fishy poking Pyro scene. . . I could picture that, and I nearly dropped my computer laughing. I'm excited for the sequel. Great story, and way to finish it strong.
| GermanSam 1/24/10 . chapter 52
O, I'm so excited! It's almost over *tear* but there will be surprises? *jumps up and down*
I can't wait for you to update and if I don't get the ending out of you in class I will be pushing you to update ASAP!
This story has gone on too long (pun intended) so it's kinda good that it's coming to an end.
But -gasps- what will you do after this?
| GermanSam 1/24/10 . chapter 51
lol I like this Tally person. She is so random and has the funny lines.
Ah Nick...though I disagree that he is scary I found that amusing anyway.
And two chapters? Are you feeling well?
I'm off to review the next one...
| Fisheh 1/24/10 . chapter 52
I has a red Bug. :D
I liked these chapters. And the whole story. And all the characters. And you. And everyone. And... *hugs*
| GermanSam 1/22/10 . chapter 50
Okay so woo! Two chapters! I'm majorly impressed and now I can stop bugging you about updating for about...a day or so.
*cough* You totally stole the ring-on-chain thing from me *cough* (Just kidding, I don't care if you did or didn't)
And aw, Jeremy? Of all people...Jeremy? Now I know why you were taking your time posting this sad chapter.
BUT YOU STILL SHOULD HAVE DONE IT SOONER!
Okay screaming done...
I'm glad they have a plan and I hope Fate/you kills Jess (but not in real life, that would be sad)
Can't wait for the next chapter...
Oh and P.S. (or whatever) I said, but you weren't listening, that I would update tomorrow as in Saturday.
And since you did two chapters, I will too! So ha! Take that!