|Reviews for Too Long|
| Py 12/2/09 . chapter 35
I can't help it. I must review this.
I love you, Fate. XD This was amazing - but still, you didn't have to. And my birthday wasn't that long ago... you're not so late...
| Fishy 11/28/09 . chapter 32
"A well rounded critique is often the most rewarding gift a reader can give."
Eff that. I LOVE YOU. There. That's about as well-rounded as you're getting from me.
That actually sounds pretty awesome, minus the federal agent. I could live there.
(Question, though: What'd they tell our parents/siblings/etc? Or did we just disappear?)
| Kayte 11/23/09 . chapter 26
Ohmigosh! It's surreal reading a chapter from my point of view. *enjoyed it far to much* But now I'm left to wonder whether I'm dead! Another great cliffhanger Fate, can't wait for the next chapter.
| nathan-p 11/23/09 . chapter 26
f man it's like a double cliffhanger now.
I'm highly amused by anything involving crossdressing ._. Blokes in skirts awesome in my book. (Most teenage dudes actually would make half-decent girls with minimal effort.)
...uh in conclusion your fic is awesome and I'm a creeper.
| nathan-p 11/22/09 . chapter 25
I would be the annoyingly genre-savvy one, wouldn't I just.
I love this fic, in case you haven't noticed yet.
| Py 11/21/09 . chapter 23
v.v Your story makes me sad. All the deaths...
Still, it's fantastic anyway. :3 Thought I'd let you know.
| GermanSam 11/17/09 . chapter 22
lol! Pale skinny girl! And I have bad timing? Gosh! lol! I couldn't stop laughing!
| nathan-p 11/16/09 . chapter 21
Road trip. Sneaking people out of the hospital.
| GermanSam 11/13/09 . chapter 1
Love the story! I can't wait for more and I can't wait for me to arrive!
| Tally 11/12/09 . chapter 16
Yay! Lamp's alive!
| Lamp Post 11/9/09 . chapter 13
Don't you think it'd be a tad impractical for someone like Lamp to randomly go missing for a /week/ without notice? I mean, you haven't mentioned leaving school so I assumed you're still all attending, plus, if all the characters are suspecting another, and the plan was for someone to see if Lamp was the killer, wouldn't it have been noticed beforehand?
*loved the fluff, all throughout the book*
Very nice, in general.
| RantingSidekick xxJelly1029xx 11/9/09 . chapter 14
You climbed into ETTAR's room? *giggle*
*wonders if you'll steal my computer*
*wonders what you'll find*
| Guest 11/8/09 . chapter 12
This crap is really starting to get on my nerves. Knock it off. Now. You should know who I am. -glares at lufflesgirl infuriated-
| Xuut 11/8/09 . chapter 13
I don't think I actually have an account here so I apologize to the fact that you can't reply to this.
Anyways, I love this story to death.
Although there is an awful lot of dialog, and not that much description. But I'm guessing that's just part of your writing style.
And FishyXMiles. I luffles it. I was grinning like mad when I read it.
I just have a question, what happened to all the adults? If Lamp went missing for a week, weren't her parents call the cops? Or are they just too busy to notice?
| Kayte 11/7/09 . chapter 13
I love you Fate! and the fact that you worked in some strange fluff.
*wonders where she's been* I've kind of disappeared. *waits to be worked back into the story*
Oh! And I like the cliffhanger! Now I really want a new chapter to know whether Lamp is alive or not.