|Reviews for Too Long|
| RantingSidekick xxJelly1029xx 11/7/09 . chapter 12
I never really understood the whole MilesxFishy ship...
*giggled so much*
| Sleepyf00l 11/5/09 . chapter 11
I like it! It's suspenseful and you take a liking to the characters. Update soon!
| Jess 11/3/09 . chapter 1
I like this new chapter better. It doesn't sound like you BS'ed it at the last second. But you're making me feel so bad. All ya'll are crying and having a huge sob fest and I'm in the corner like "Uh? OH, that's right! *stealthfully wipes water on her face and makes crying noises like everyone else.* At least you put in that I was close to Kalene. And you know, it is okay if I cry at her funeral. You can make it so I feel bad and show it to everyone. Because I would. You should make Josh's chapter a little more realistic however. I personally don't think he would catch on that fast. But that's just me. But seroiusly, next chapter, the one where we are at Kalene's funeral, let me cry. Or even seem choked up and say something like*I"m sorry Kalene. I didn't mean it!*. it is good though.
| Ni 10/31/09 . chapter 3
Why am I not logged in right now...
Anyway, I like this.
But sadly, I can't get drunk at the moment.
Stupid drinking age.