No need to be sorry. That was cool. I wanna see Gabriel's story! YAY! Update soon please!

Aww~ Sammy's cute! And DIE ZOMBIES! *hits a bystander*
Bystander: HEY!! *takes out a machine gun*
Me:: Well, that was random. Oh well. *takes out a lazar and I start zapping hi and other innocent bystanders and corn* I'M FIRIN' MA LAZAR! AHAHAHAHAHA!

A good story, funny in places, Gab is an amusing character. My only gripe is that you skipped the scene were they kill all the zombies in wal-mart, I felt a little let down. I also think it could do with some fine tuning, I got the impression that you haven't thought about it enough, and that your style isn't quite finished, however, the writing style that you have gone for I love, it's just my sort of story. I will be reading on if you update.

When i read this story i kind of get the vibe i get from "Zombieland." It's a new movie coming out, I don't know if you've heard of it or maybe its a big coincidence, but that's kind of what it's feeling like to me. Continue writing, but do consider making checking out a summary of the movie so you don't take the same road.

...well, that's one way to look at the swine flu. Cool. I'll be waiting for updates!

good start interested in reading more, of course