OMFG This is fucking hilarious. I wouldn't have minded if you wrote them banging in a second chapter just saying.

kinda creepy

but okay

i like this story.

for some reason i found it extremely humorous. i really like the switch of pov between the two. i find their thoughts to be very amusing. thanks for a great story!

LOL. great

mac is so crepy :D

ah this kills me. all your stories are so fucked up. i fucking love it.

I keep thinking I should be freaked out by a guy lusting after a boy for ten years, yet somehow I can't muster the required degree of indignation. Instead, what crossed my mind when I got to the end was: "And the sex?"

Disturbing.

Anyway, just as great as your other writings, though I'd have liked to read more about them (and no, not only the sex scene. ;) ).

They're so wonderful. I love Mac's nerdy, old man strangeness and I really wish I could pick up Dustin up and cuddle all his hurt away.

This is the first time that i've read anything by you and I have to say that I'm on my way to being a fan :)

Hahha I love them.

They are two of the most unique characters I've ever read of.

Mac is so..nerdy and gay, but at the same time kind of just plain odd inside.

And Dustin is a dirty-mouth pissed-off boy who seems really confused and adorable.

I would love to read about them again if you plan to make any more stories with them. (:

I like him even if he is a pedo.

(Which is clearly enough to say in a review.)