 SingingBird812 2009-11-04 . chapter 4This seems quite interesting, but I think it would be better if the spelling was checked before it got posted; it would make it much easier to read. I hope to read more soon. :) |
 luvetowrite 2009-11-04 . chapter 4Wow...so he is in solid form, how interesting. This is turning into quite an adventure, time travel...nice job
:) |
 Anonymous 2009-11-04 . chapter 3 shes very accepting of her situation
awesome story :)can't wait to read more |
 luvetowrite 2009-11-03 . chapter 3Great chapter, she accepts that she is the reincarnation of the long dead Queen. I wonder what Howard is going to say about that
Nice work :) |
 luvetowrite 2009-11-01 . chapter 2Wonderful chapter. I love the history incorporated into this story, and the mystery and romance of the far past and present time.
Good work |
 luvetowrite 2009-10-31 . chapter 1Oh I like this...mysterious and you captured the atmosphere very well...the sand, heat, finding the tomb. Lovely
Continue soon |