 Stardancere 2009-11-04 . chapter 1:) I like how cute and contradictory this is. From one aspect I see a brave, caring father looking after his daughter... from the other I see a comical image of a father with a sugar-tooth taking half the candy ^^ |
 Kiwi-kiwi6 2009-11-01 . chapter 1Ha! I love this. It's so true! It's so nice of him to "risk his life" to save yours. |
 The Redheaded Brunette 2009-11-01 . chapter 1This is cute.
I enjoy reading such humorious poetry.
I find this funny, because my father did the same. |
 Innocent Blood 2009-11-01 . chapter 1Haha, wow. That's the part where you should've said, "No daddy, anything but my candy!"
~Karrah |
 Punslinger 2009-10-31 . chapter 1 You should have come trick or treating to my house. I would have given you a wholesome organically grown apple. I bet your Dad wouldn't have eaten that. |