Quaint and sweet. Thanks for bringing it to fictionpress. Although time elapsed pretty rapidly without seeing the development of relationship between main characters, I could kind of anticipate the ending. The last line was what did me in :).

This is quite cute. Very laid back and uncomplicated. I love this. Keep up the awesome work.

Lia Star

Excellent! So much so that I begin to wish it were longer... and hope I find something else similar on fictionpress since I think that wont happen!

I thought it was a bit random,but pretty cute!

loll. this is cute, but i got confused with who's mute n stuff. sweet ending :D

cute. :D

i love your story. :D

So original & funny!
Keep on spreading the love for writing!

Awesome! I really enjoyed reading this! More beneath the surface than other short romances. :)

~LOVE IT!

The last part was cute =D
Thanks for sharing