 eskimoxisses 2009-11-22 . chapter 1Quaint and sweet. Thanks for bringing it to fictionpress. Although time elapsed pretty rapidly without seeing the development of relationship between main characters, I could kind of anticipate the ending. The last line was what did me in :). |
 Lia Star 2009-11-18 . chapter 1This is quite cute. Very laid back and uncomplicated. I love this. Keep up the awesome work.
Lia Star |
 letyoursoultakeflight 2009-11-16 . chapter 1Excellent! So much so that I begin to wish it were longer... and hope I find something else similar on fictionpress since I think that wont happen! |
 Eat Muffinz. 2009-11-12 . chapter 1I thought it was a bit random,but pretty cute! |
 Elmo'z BFF 2009-11-07 . chapter 1loll. this is cute, but i got confused with who's mute n stuff. sweet ending :D |
 -ehM- 2009-11-05 . chapter 1cute. :D
i love your story. :D |
 WitheredWings 2009-11-05 . chapter 1So original & funny!
Keep on spreading the love for writing! |
 Mirabella 2009-11-03 . chapter 1Awesome! I really enjoyed reading this! More beneath the surface than other short romances. :) |
 VanillaChocola 2009-11-02 . chapter 1~LOVE IT! |
 Sarah Watson 2009-10-31 . chapter 1The last part was cute =D
Thanks for sharing |