Oh, Essie is just biting off more than she can chew by letting the twins stay in her apartment.

And... Miguel, Miguel, MIGUEL! I love Miguel, if only because he makes me open Google Translate. ;D

okay in my world this is what will happen in the next chapter:
Mitchell will help Miguel get an awesome job, Dot will leave Mitchell for Miguel and move in with Miguel. Oliver and Grifin idk about that.

I'm starting to get apprehensive here... I hope Peaches doesn't do anything silly. :(

Lol, Dot and I are so similar. If I had a Mitchell, we wouldn't have even lasted as long as he and Dot have... xD She's such a firecracker!!

:( Peaches is really making me sad. And what is up with Mitchell? Rich LOSER.

Justin is kind of cool in the I'll-never-love-you-as-much-as-I-love-Eddie-but-you-are-still-awesome kind of way. :D

It's like invasion of the body snatchers or something! Justin freaks me out... o.O

OMG *salsa Dance*, yay MIGUEL IS BACK ! Yay ! I'm happy although .I'm sad because Dot doesn't know yet :-(. Essie rules the world cuz shes like a mum and a best friend at the same time :D

cool chapter. lol my dad would love to have a gf like dot. not having to spend that much money on her. is it bad that i like miguel more than mitchel? i mean i dont not like mitchel i just prefer miguel rather than mitchel, i dont get the urge to say "aw they're so meant for eachother" when him and dot r together but hey at least hes not a peaches! *ps. i dont really hate peaches hes just on my annoyed with list for breaking essies heart*

Phew, I hope Dot can resolve her and Mitchell's problem now.

But oh Essie ;_;. Guh! Peaches, I hope you manage to find a beginning towards solving your problems.

To Justin: It is totally possible to accidentally injure yourself a lot (as in, letting that fish hook have dug up so far). I was once hanging out at my brother's friends house, they were playing video games and I was sort of bouncing on the couch (it was a very bouncy couch) right near the open cabinet for the entertainment system. Next thing I know, I'm holding my arm, bleeding profusely, and asking for a band-aid. In my bouncing I managed to cut my arm from nearly my elbow to my wrist(nearly, it was pretty long, though it didn't scar, so I can't honestly say the exact length). Caught the corner of the cabinet door at just the right angle and being bouncing there was some extra downward gravity and bam!

I dunno, going be Peaches's past behaviour, self harm seems odd for him. I believe his story.

Look forward to the next chapter!

I totally understand Dot right now. I jsut had that happen to me not long ago. So much for the stereotype all gay men are emotionally in touch, my friend wasn't :C.

I wish a hot guy would try to make me feel better. Love you Oliver

I remember when i called my ex-friend, she was liek my sister till things got bad..
I was so elated to hear her voice and we hung out later even though we didn't talk much it was worth it. It took like an hour and a half to get the nerve to phone her.

ok ive gotten used to eddies emoness and peaches'stupidity and paranoia! oh dot i love ur vag too!! and dont worry if i hug u eddie! i dont have enough lady lumps for u to notice! hehe love the chapters keep them coming.

Oh I feel for Justin but not enough for Peaches to get with him. I hope they sort things soon, I feel myself getting sadder with every chapter when they're not together. And poor Dot and Mitchel. You also are really making me like DOT/OLIVER even though I know they're probably closer to brother and sister now. I hope they're okay soon too! Oh please update soon!

I think this is the first chapter where I have liked Prescott. Go dude! It was nice of him to talk to Eddie about his past. I can see an unusual but beautiful friendship forming. Something tells me I'm not gonna like Justin...

all the people in my town who have harleys or any bikes i cant spell motercylce, are all over 50, and they go really slow..

OMG , This was epic (literally this time). Your making me even more depressed now. PEACHES!! Why must you be so difficult ?? From Eddies and Dots point of view we really must all be on Eddies side but i think Peaches has his reasons although they aren't good enough to do what he did. Finally seeing the pain Peaches is going through makes me think that maybe it's not all his fault. When Justine walked in i was like "Oh, i know him " it was nice to finally meet him :D. But Dot was sad ,so i was sad. I miss Miguel !

This was amazing i CAN'T WAIT for the next chapter :D

P.s. I was just wondering how many chapters there are going to be ??

P.p.s. I was also wondering if Eddie ever gets closure with his Father ?? I have a lot of time to wonder about things :D

TashXX