Really cute (:

Lmao, at the end I had to take a double-take and reread it, because I was like : wtfux? His her boyfriend? xD.
Unexpected twist.
Obtw, the main character reminds me of myself. Just see me in real life.
x)

lol - nice twist- definitely wasnt expecting that. I thought they were going to have a love hate thing going on at first. so it was a shock to find out that hes her boyfriend

nice twist. totally didn't expect that. i mean, i was thinking, the story is almost done - how will she meet the guy and begin to like him in ten lines and then he turned out to be her boyfriend.

Nice.

Ri

Haha! very good! she's so funny! :>

Cute twist! I like! Your main lady character is pretty interesting...she's such a hyper person and a lil meanie to her sis...hahaha~

definitely a twist, ha ha. very very cute although she seems to be even younger than her 7 yr old sister ha ha

awwh, where was this in my inbox?!
i need to give my inbox a stern talking to.
xD
but that was adorable. :]
oh gawsh, i wasn't expecting that ending! ^^

Lol, this story is veery cute =D

i never wouldve guessed he was her boyfriend

LOL i loved the twist!
well done ^__^

loved it..

So cute. Never expected the guy to be her boyfriend of 2 years! :D

Uhm.
Oh gosh please please don't hate me but I didn't actually like it =[
My reasons? I'm really sorry about this. But...
It had like very little description, the end was very confusing and overall seemed a bit rushedd =[
Sowwi. It just wasn't very goodd...and I KNOW you can do better. That's why I'm saying it. Sorry.

Haha I love the ending - very interesting (and cute!) twist.
Absolutely adorable :)

Awesome story!!