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That Green Gentlewoman 2009-11-03 . chapter 2
*Raises eyebrow* (as if i could, but i'm working on it)

"This is the way the world ends
This is the way the world ends
This is the way the world ends
Not with a bang, but a whimper."
-The immortal TS Eliot

I like the underdog reference. ($60 man! /bastards/)
That Green Gentlewoman 2009-11-01 . chapter 1
very cool. i'd like to see a story where that opening line actually has something to do with the story though. (not that it doesn't have to do with your piece, but, you know what i mean.) anyways, good stuff, but it could do with a /little/ editing: missing words and the like. but yeah, me like :) I'd pull out specific phrases, but i'm a lazy bum.

oh btw, i'm not the "loser" am i?
That Random Girl Who Writes 2009-11-01 . chapter 1
Hey, nice job. I was wondering, how DO you actually submit to NaNo WriMo? Is there a website? Guidelines? I'm really interested in this, and once I get the ball rolling, it'll be great. Please help me out. Thanks.
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