Wait a second, you're doing NaNoWriMo!? Holy hell that's awesome! =D

Anyway. Review. Because that's what this is supposed to be.

It's an interesting first chapter; very oddball, a bit confusing in a good way, and I laughed at quite a few points. Particularly at the possibility of there being survivors in the lightbulb (oh god no!).

So yeah. It's an interesting start, and quite good for a NaNo story (I should know, mine's an absolute mess that could make the 1989 Batman look like TDK), so I'll be wanting to see how this turns out. Best of luck! =D

~Dawley