It seems after my first review you gained two more, a bit interesting, no? I very much enjoyed this chapter, it was brilliant. I've never been very fond of cliff hangers but i will admit yours are enjoyable.

Till your next update,

Ekko Rein

I've only read the preface (due to lack of time), but I really wanted to read more. Your story already is intriguing and very well written. Nothing seems awkward or forced, everything just flows. I'm liking this a lot and no doubt I'll have to contiune reading it.

P.S. I went to your playlist and saw muse and death cab for cutie...that made me happy :D

This could very well be one the best stories I have read on this website. I'm not kidding. I can't stop reading it! The chapters are long, which is good. Many stories have 5 paragraph "Chapters" which can get annoying.

Also, there are words in here that I've never heard of. But thats a good thing! Too many stories overuse bland words.

This story is definetly unique! Kepp writing!

(Also, I'm really disappointed when a chapter ends haha)

I love yur story, please update it's been 2 months!