i like this poem, i was a little confused by the line "mine does for you because we" but other than that, great job

ash

Could have called it "Red Carnations" - you know, "my heart aches for you"? Haha. :P
I love it. :D Somehow, the repetition of that one phrase in there doesn't make it seem annoying or, well, repetetive at all - to me, it just makes it more sweetly haunting. More sad. Great job with this. ;)
Livvy

awe.
I like this.

Wow.
I totally understand the emotion in this.
Been there, done that..unfourtunatly.
Good job.