|Reviews for The Artist|
| Midnight In Eden 11/18/09 . chapter 1
Frick. I keep pressing the favorite button when I mean to review. Apologies!
Now for my actual review: I really enjoyed how you brought such a simple concept to life with such vivid phrasing. It's interesting how clearly I can see this more abstract vision at work too. I always find it a difficult then when you're *writing* about the techniques of another art form but I felt it worked here.
My only scrap of concrit is that I wasn't sure about the repetition of "your" on lines six and seven - it jarred the read a bit for me.
Otherwise, lovely work.