I really love this story so far, the characters are great! And I'm really interested to see where it goes, especially with Sam and Ike. I'm a bit upset that your going to take it down to rewrite it, but I'll totally be around for the rewrite.

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I am not impressed with you leaving this story!! >:(

Aw, they're so cute. I like them, too. They're just, y'know, aw, and stuff. Cute chapter :D

Wow. I finally got around to reading the last chapter et voila, a new one pops up! Magic!

Shane's been found, yay! That's really good, even though *mumble mumble* I don't want to say - just in case it's a spoiler for someone! And, well, I could be wrong.. :P

*cough* good thing that warning is there. Though kinda cute at the end.

(oh, when Warren adjusts his seat in the car; typo 'head' instead of 'he')

hahaa, poor Simon; everyone's got sex on the brain!

Interesting that his Dad owned up to being a para... and a half-brother?! dun dun dun... I think I would have been more shocked at that though, to find out so suddenly.

Hmm.. Simon's also starting to like Ike, not sure how that's all gonna turn out! I mean, I know Hannah was a tad annoying in the previous version but that seems a bit mean if the relationship goes down the tubes in the way I'm currently expecting.

But then, who knows what'll happen? :D That's the fun bit!

Hm. I like Ike best. Have I mentioned that? And of course Tanner is also my favorite, just because he's Joseph Gordon-Levitt and therefore owns my soul. Mmhmm. So. Yeah. I think Ike and Simon should make babies. Metaphorically, of course. Yes. That is my personal opinion. Beautiful, beautiful metaphorical babies.

This is interesting.

It's hard for me to tell if Simon's gay or not. Frankly it'd be way more fun if he was, but he keeps going on and on and on about his stupid Hannah, who seems actually kind of annoying in my personal opinion. Hmm. Anyways.

this is interesting.

I have a bunch of stories on alert, and forgot which one this was after I opened it in a tab yesterday for later reading. It took me half a chapter, to the super healing part, to remember. The setting change to Theo's funeral threw me off! I'd forgotten about the whole him dying thing! But, uh, yes, I like this story. You are write good and I love the supernatural stuff. Nom nom nom.

hmm, sexy Warren. Nice image :P I was laughing at Dylan's drooling.

Uhrm, for the moment, I can't think of much else to comment on, and I should get back to my uni work instead.. :D

And wow for quick updates!!

Too tired to say much more than that I read it and I enjoyed it. I'm a big fan of supernatural stuff.

Ahh I'd like to know what he doesn't remember.. Seems like someone swooped in, kicked ass, and got him back home safe. Hehe, I'll leave speculation as to who that was for now...

Telekinesis though, pretty cool - I see some funny scenario's that could be there when he tries out his powers!

I liked Dylan's little cameo too - you can see where it's coming together and how characters are connected.

oh, this looks good. I'm excited to read more now. and good luck with nanowrimo!

This is freaking awesome! I can't wait for the next update... :)

Wow. I read the Three men & a Witch fic, and indeed, it's a LOT different! * laughs*

Anyway! I quite like it up until now! keep it going and good luck on National Novel Writing Month!