Heh.. thanks for the explanation xD I thought she was a vampire or an 'immortal child' as they call it in Twilight, but then wondered why her mum wasn't one. So yeah zombies make much more sense. I quite like the brokenness of your sentences which makes her sound more child-like, and thus makes the cruelty more out of place.

Amazing, powerful story, and such a wonderful idea. I can't wait for the others ^^