I loved it, it was awesome

Nice job dude but it's SHOKITO not Shinjuku, with Shokito Academy as the only high school. Academy not High, Academy sounds more like it would fit, High just isn't cool enough. Otherwise, just try to make the chapters a little longer ok?
if you want PM me and I'll set up a beta profile so I can be your beta reader ok?

hehe i like it and can't wait for the next chapter >.< it sounds really intresting and i liked the bit about the manga !!