This is really cute!

I really like this. The way Ricky and Scott flow with each other is very entertaining.

As a note. You lapsed in to first person during the scene where Ricky went and ordered a coke in the bar right before the teenager began to hit on Scott. It lasted for about four or five sentences I think.

Coincidently my name is Kelsey as well, only I have that extra 'e' before the 'y'. This is only the secodn or thrid story I've seen this name used in actually. lol.

Hope you found that helpful!

Happy Writing!

-Dare

Interesting...till the next part then!!