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RK96 2009-11-16 . chapter 1
hey! lol hopefully u'll figure out who this!

i liked ur poem:D it was interesting..i agree with wat the other reviewer said about sumthing that i cant remeber lol.

ok bye bye
rk96-aka-sum1 u shud noe
Chasmira 2009-11-03 . chapter 1
I'm not entirely certain what the meaning of this poem is, like you say, however, I'm not good at deciphering poetry anyways. :) I think it could have some meaning, the language is very lovely, and there seems to be some underlying message. I like the repetition of the water washing over the tide, an intriguing concept. Perhaps you could write a story based upon this poem that helps it make more sense?
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