Just remember that this is constructive criticism: I can't see a style and rhythm associated with this song. Well, I can't define it by how I associate lyrics with a song. It is poetic, yes, but where is the song? Where is the flow? No rhymes. No syllable traits. This is a great poetic piece. I understand the meaning and feel the emotion. But I can't tell why this piece is in the song section. By definition, you can sing any words, and therefore, can be a song. But it is nice to see effort by an author to establish clear evidence that, this poetic piece, is in fact, a song, and not just to be read. This review is not mean't to be hurtful, just mindful.

I do like the comparison between tears and seas. That is nice.