Wow! You really can write! Keep up the good work!

Good job on this chapter; it was even more fascinating then the other ones! Keep up the good work!

Hey,
That's a good theme! I really like the way it's going :) I'm not really into Sci-Fi, but this has intrigued me. Keep writing!!
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You really do have a gift for writing; the way you write makes everything seem so alive! Keep up the good work!

Well you certainly captured the ‘superhero’ thing right. This story’s bringing back flash-backs of my sister’s childhood Saturday morning cartoons. Good job!

Just earlier today, I had a conversation with someone about how we were not really into superhero things, but even if I didn’t owe you a review, I think I would still read this. Often times who the author is can greatly effect if I’ll review or even read a story, and this is one of those cases. There aren’t enough of us out there that are anti premarital sex and we sometimes need to give each other encouragement. Also, I love where you based the story! I have a lot of relatives in Buffalo and I love it there! My cousin said that when Extreme makeover came to Buffalo she wouldn’t be surprised if Ty Pennington was mugged- by a cat! I also love how organized you seem to bee with this story- you know what you’re writing about, who you’re writing about, and I doubt there will be many out-of-character moments.

Damn I’m tired…I’m rambling too much…oh well, I’m hitting the top of your list for weirdest review…Anywho, I’m looking forward to reading you story! Keep up the good work!

Wow nice start, its a very good introduction too with whosm dating who and that so we dont get it complicated. Like in some stories we do so good that you have done that. Grmmars seems ti be spot on too. Nicely first chapter xx

I'm willing to reserve judgement, but I bet your character development won't be as good unless you had feweer characsters. Every character takes extra words, time, and work to be seen as fully fleshed out caricatures of humans, and you seem to have a lot of unnecessary ones.