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for shame. 2009-11-10 . chapter 9
whenever i forget what i'm supposed to do, i look in the fridge for answers.
for shame. 2009-11-10 . chapter 7
haha.

i know a girl who had abnormally large boobs at the age of 12.
later, we found out she padded her bra. with layers and layers of tissue paper.
she leaned down one day, and tissues came tumbling out.
beautiful sight. a tissue avalanche.
for shame. 2009-11-10 . chapter 5
m. we all get those days, and we all get those weird dreams.
for shame. 2009-11-10 . chapter 4
i liked it before.
now i REALLY like it.

it's relatable; struggle between theater and sports is something a lot of kids go through. especially if they're talented in both, and love both equally.

honestly, my favorite part is when you talk about clothing. "we are a person, not a zoo." best line ever. i laughed out loud.

you have true talent.
for shame. 2009-11-10 . chapter 2
oh. i haven't seen paranormal activity yet.
i'm putting it off as long as possible, because i just can't stomach horror movies.

i really like these letters. they can address the really important things without getting too serious, or too depressed. it's interesting to see how someone deals with theirself.
for shame. 2009-11-10 . chapter 1
this is very interesting.
i almost laughed at a few parts.

i guess you're never too old for a talking-to.
Insomnia Breeds Insanity 2009-11-09 . chapter 7
Don't worry, I've done the same. And been accuse of lesbianism. I slugged the boy who did that. Girl power! Until he shoved me on my butt and got yelled at by my best guy friend.
Insomnia Breeds Insanity 2009-11-07 . chapter 6
Funny! Update, please?
Insomnia Breeds Insanity 2009-11-05 . chapter 4
Funny. I should do something like this.

--PAB
That Random Girl Who Writes 2009-11-05 . chapter 4
I love this! plz write more! (see my PM)
oHriginal 2009-11-04 . chapter 1
lol this is great!
a great way to let out the little rants in your head without looking like you've completely lost your mind!
lovely... although no one is ever too old to keep a diary!
(instead we just reword it as, journal...)
bookkeeper 2009-11-03 . chapter 2
these are really good! it's interesting to see it in a written format and very cleverly written!
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