What was Gee doing when she "I kissed"? It's at the end of a dialogue paragraph. It looks like you forgot to finish typing the rest of your thought.

And what the ** did Sam do!!??

Jackass.

Oh God, in your summary you wrote that Sam was special. I hope to god he gets better or I'll need to kick his **! This is a fun chapter xD

wyatt seems, decent? good job :)

Loved it, update soon!

Oh wow, this is an amazing chapter! I’m glad we’ve got a glimpse at the new family and awwh at them making Gee feel so comfortable. I can’t wait until we get a deeper insight at Sam. Update soon, please!

You are missing a 't' when you're introducing people, and I wouldn't use "this" a second time in one sentence, but it's dialogue, so it can be overlooked if you really want it to be.

Below that, you have "A nodded my head." Wrong, silly goose. "I" not "A".

"I handed Keira a purple monkey out of the crib and a pacifier form her diaper bag." I believe that "form" in there should be "from".

I would rephrase that very last sentence so that you didn't have Gee doing two things in one sentence. It never seemed to flow correctly (to me at least). I PERSONALLY think (so this can be disregarded) that you should change it to "I gasped. Cooper looked furious."

I liked this chappy. Fantastic job~!!

Loved it, update soon!

haha i kinda like sam. he's funny. more more more!

kinda unusual but i like it so far

I like the way you started this story. You threw everything at us at once, and I still understood what was going on. That's true talent, my friend, true talent. =D

This is different from the other things I've read, I can't wait to see what you do with it!

OMG, I need more! This is a great start. I think you might want to work on your layout like italics for flashbacks and stars to divide up when we move somewhere else because it makes it easier to read. But apart from that this looks like a promising storyline and I can't wait for more! Update soon, please!

Very interesting. I'm sort of glad you got to the main point in just one chapter so things can start heading faster towards the plot.

Cant' wait to see what you have next.

Love it so far! Update soon!