|Reviews for Advice|
| letyoursoultakeflight 11/15/09 . chapter 1
I love this :) It all works so well together and I really get into it :) If it was a song it would be the catchy one that refuses to escape your head XD
| ScarlettMoonWitch 11/14/09 . chapter 1
I really like this poem. You wrote it very well and I'm glad you wrote it too. Great work.
| Moondog Dozier 11/11/09 . chapter 1
That's what it's all about. Writing is a passionate art, alot of people, including myself, forget that too often. Marvelously well put. MD:77.
| Ernest Bloom 11/9/09 . chapter 1
needless to say, this is all
really most excellent, most
passionate, and i love the
summary, 'Trust me; I'm not
a doctor.' can't think of
any reason to trust you any
more than that.
| Sercus Kaynine 11/8/09 . chapter 1
I adored the idea here; I think it's something every writer can relate to. The tone gave it an intense feel, as well.
Good luck in WCC!
| Isca 11/7/09 . chapter 1
"Write until your hands are shaking and your head is shaking." I don't think that I can explain the reason why this line affected me so much, but it did, and I'm so glad that I read it. :)
| Midnight In Eden 11/5/09 . chapter 1
Wow. I've been looking for a good poem on FP lately as I get back into the swing of writing and reading on this site and this is definitely it. Adding this to my favorites so I can come back and read this whenever I get writer's block. I loved the demanding and insistent tone of the poem and blunt simplicity of the language. There was some repetition that was bordering on unnecessary (i.e. not sure about the double up of "shaking" on "hands" and "head"). But I couldn't find much to critique in this piece. Thanks for reminding me that there are still solid poets on FP.
| Calisto 23 11/4/09 . chapter 1
That's awesome! It sure made me chuckle, especially the ending :D Good read!