Aww... adorable! i love how these two interact. just so sweet how they banter back and forth and the blushing totally plays! joseph the hero sniff sniff so cute.

Aw, that was sweet! Can't wait to read more :D!

aw... another one that made me smile. jesse seems like a sweetheart - just like the way you describe him and his easy going personality. isabel is a different story - kinda hard to read except when jesse reminds her of jason. you get to see a little bit of the girl inside the shell she seems to have built. love the whole story. especially the end when they snuggle up together... very cute.

keep up the good work!

WOWOWOWOWOW! OMG i loved this. so quirkily (apparently spell check doesn't think that is a real word) romantic. aw. perfect first kiss scenario. loved the way he slid the conversation that way... sniff sniff, so cute!

I loved it! Keep writing, I can't wait to read more. You're a fantastic writer.

hey.

awwh this is so so cute.

and sweet.

and an amazing er...its the first kiss, yea?

i like :D

peace.

aryagal

Aw I thought this was pretty cute! A nice read, although a bit short, but I guess when you're writing shots, they should be right? ;p good work!