I can't even begin to describe how much I love this.
"the twilight murmuring
their sweet-nothings to the moon" Wonderful personification!
The entire second paragraph is just filled with such amazing emotion. Perfect. & I can relate so well.
"and crashing much further into love
as we touch the sky with our fingertips." Lovely imagery!
This was beautiful :)

These two poems are so incredible!
great job!

"and i am left with nothing but a mere notion
that you’re already gone
but here i am, still holding on..."

This ending is quite powerful. The last line, in particular, is impactful and moving. :)

"and i reach out for your hand
but your silhouette fades" amazing lines.
wonderful imagery in this :)

This was wonderful & I really like the title. The last few lines were really great.
& most definately, you should start a pillowbook! They're fun to read & fun to write. :)

I'm so lame I didn't even know what a pillow book was. I looked it up and Yes you should definately make a pillow book. Sounds like massive amounts of fun.