But you really can't go around saying eros doesn't have feelings for her. I mean he's a god of love he must feel what he's given out to other people. You can't be a god of love and fall into love because you are love it's self. Or something like that. Though it would kind of be funny to see. lol. You did really good on this chapter. Can't wait to read more keep up the good work. i am glad you did pretty okay on your exaimes.

GAH! they were so close!

I really like this part it was something i couldn't foresee. You did really well. I look forward to when you next write. Also good luck on exams! You'll do well! Good job on the story.

I think i accidently put the review for chapter nine on chapter eight so there will be two reviews if my computer did what i think it just did.

Oh my god. Her friend is totally a... (Insert swear word.) Though for a second i got my hopes up thining eros was going to come to her rescue and posses/take visual shape. But it waS really good and kept me on the edge of my seat. Good job.

thanks!! xD and no, you can't take the week off or any day off until you finish this story:P

Good job. What a turn I was cracking up so hard. I didn't expect him to be. Totaly mind blown. Good job.

update update!!

Bad move bad move. Fist to the wrong persons face. I would have curled in a corner some where and died i would have been so embarrased. I am surprised she hasn't got a baby sitting for dumbes book yet. lol. Good job. The story is comming along splennedly.

That was so frink'n funny he knew the whole time that that was a family memeber. and magical bats are great!! Lol. I couldn't stop laughing she had the right at the end to gave him that verg descriptive nickname! kuddoo's!

You did so wonderfully! *Glomp* that was really a good twist and i am glad to see that you keep writing. I love the story so much the characters seemed really developed. IF you ever publish i was to be first in life for a copy. XD

Think her ... invisible.. *Cough, gaurdine being is a little jealous!* really really good job. I love how it's getting more indepth. Keep up the good writing.

That is so funny. I love the invisible guy his sarcasim is top notch! Good job! :)

Thanks so much!

I was laughing so hard i swore my side would split open. That was great. I enjoyed it alot. Good job.