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   mgmtlover18 2/14/13 . chapter 15Are you going to finish the story? Please let us know! |
| Gothic-innocence16 2/10/13 . chapter 15 Whoa this story just got more tense. I like it. Update soon. |
| Guest 12/24/12 . chapter 1 I just want to say I love this story and I hope for and update soon |
| Guest 12/20/12 . chapter 15 CONTINUE! AND I WANT NATHANIEL AND JORDAN TOGETHOR AND could you please make the love scenes more detailed and erotic?! I mean I think this could be a great delicious erotic story. And personnally could you make Nathaniel a bit more manly and more dominant. I think that would make him an even better and sexier character and as for Jordan. That girl needs to get her priorities straight and stop acting so dumb and stupid. She pisses me off toooo. Make her a much more smarter and independant girl and 15? Wow such a youung age. 17 wouldve been better. and Nathaniel shouldve been a bit more older tooo. like 24! BUT OTHER THAN THAT A GREAT STORY AND GREAT PLEASE |
| Guest 12/20/12 . chapter 13 I think it should be Nathaniel and Jordan! |
| Michelle 12/12/12 . chapter 15 Yay! A update! OMG! Just make Jordan tell Nathaniel already that shes from the future! The suspense is killing us readers more then him! lol. I am not liking Axel... he is seriously creeping D: But if he does end up taking/kidnapping her to Europe I vote for Switzerland lol. I'd rather go to Canada though if I was Jordan. -(If I had to stay in that time period lol) I wonder how he'll respond to that confession that Jordan just told him... And yeah, thank you so much for this update! And I hope you update again real soon :) |
| oceaneyez 12/10/12 . chapter 15 This is really interesting! Please keep it up I can't wait to read the rest :) |
| A-JINX 12/9/12 . chapter 15 finally! its bee so long. i cant believe jordan keeps tell axel that she loves him GAWD! she know she doesn't! i wonder hows hes going to react now that she told him shes from the future...oh the suspense! please please please update sooner |
| KayMichW1017 12/9/12 . chapter 15 Oh My Gosh! I love this story, it's amazing! You are a really good writer! Do you think that you could look at my stuuf and comment on how to make it better? |
| Puella Magi Mystia 12/8/12 . chapter 15 I find it interesting how it took her this long to reveal this information to someone who wasn't already aware of it. XD; I'll wait patiently for your next update |
| Jai98 10/31/12 . chapter 14 This is really good, it's actually quite interesting because there is some type of action happening unlike many other stories I have read. I love your writing style as well! :) |
| reader 10/5/12 . chapter 3 mustve been hard to write its a sensitive subject |
| Duckie's Day 8/29/12 . chapter 14 So intense and sweet! I can't wait to read more! Update soon! |
| Pream 7/1/12 . chapter 14 Finally the story has been updated! lol you are such an amazing author _ |
| supervirgin 6/28/12 . chapter 14 i love this story, but their something missing, the charactor are good but it doesnt seem at realistic |
