I like this version of Little Red Riding Hood. I almost feel sorry for the wolf that he didn't get his meal! I like the fact that you are very descriptive with your writing, as I can imagine the characters easily. It was enjoyable reading what the wolf thought! Good imagination.

Before I go I just want to point out a little error I found:

'...little girl with the old woman returned, shotgun in hand...'

I think it should be 'when the old woman returned'.

Anyhoot, once again I liked reading your story. Very imaginative and enjoyable.

cute version.