|Reviews for Never|
| nobody's dream girl 10/15/10 . chapter 1
Oh so beautiful &inspiring
| xOneLastingImpressionx 10/11/10 . chapter 1
A very deep and emotional piece, but also very pretty :)
| aeolyn 9/27/10 . chapter 1
The emotions are really strong in your poem and I love the ending lines. Great job!
| seagreen03 8/29/10 . chapter 1
i m soo envious! u re so good in poetry! love the part of the first raindrop-fragile and broken and the last paragraph
| name redacted 8/26/10 . chapter 1
Interesting, almost prosey feel. The style seems very personal, like it's thoughts intended for the one person it adresses. My only suggestion is to proofread, because there are a few (possibly intentional?) grammatical errors, such as the lack of an article before "cloudy one" in the first line. Also, some awkwardness in the phrase "the tears of yours" (consider "those" instead of "the" maybe). Still, great poem.
| Erlkoenigin 12/22/09 . chapter 1
Mein Gott, wie traurig, aber trotzdem gut!
Wie geht es eigentlich deinem Vater?
| nickyO 11/7/09 . chapter 1
Lyrical and gorgeous and sad. Love the part about the hands and the repeation of "you keep saying you never cry".
| Saurosuchus 11/6/09 . chapter 1
this was lovely. the imagery of the character watching the sky and anticipating the rain was especially refreshing and emitted a feeling throughout the whole piece that caused the reader to truly relate and feel the emotions of the character.
| MoonlightRouge 11/6/09 . chapter 1
beautiful poem, I LOVE The first line great work
keep it up