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Mirabella 2009-11-15 . chapter 8
Another beautiful poem. And i really love the name of it. :)
Mirabella 2009-11-14 . chapter 7
Love this part:
Scribbled, in silence
in silence...

I liked the repetition of it. :)
Mirabella 2009-11-13 . chapter 6
Seems like a poem about the journey to death. Sort of opposites and pretty/sad imagery to display possible paths perhaps.
I like it. :)
Mirabella 2009-11-10 . chapter 5
Another lovely poem. :)
I like the idea of a whispering wall. Seems that boundaries are not finite.
Mirabella 2009-11-09 . chapter 4
I really like this part:
This little lonely flower
You never gave me

It seemed very full of imagery and meaning. :)
Mirabella 2009-11-08 . chapter 3
This reminds me of a dandelion! :) All free an peacefull and fying to give hope. :) LOVE the imagery as usual!
Mirabella 2009-11-07 . chapter 2
LOVE it! Memories and snow is such an apt name, as just like snow, memories are kind of recurring and also dimming. Old age dims memories and files them away, just as easons dim snow flakes and file them away for another time and place.
So it seem a lovely dream about remembering good. As instead ofa black crow, it is white. :) I love this! Definitely a favourite. :)
DeleteConvo 2009-11-06 . chapter 1
I love this poem, I stumbled on it randomly. It reads like a melody, like the poem says. Its very haunting and vivid.

"Why, such loneliness
Silence, and noise"
I absolutely love this line as well

Great poem!
Mirabella 2009-11-05 . chapter 1
Love this part:
A never-ending dream
And a withered tree
Where is the light,
this melody

It's so beautiful, wistful seeming, and sad too, i think. :)

And i like the idea of a piano playing in the silence. And i see the white dream theme again!
Maybe the white silence in this is slightly clinical? When you write "amid tears and noise in the pure white silence", it seems that amid emotions and day to day life, still it is just someone silent and in the dark. :)

Another great poem, even if i am totally wrong in the interpretation!:)
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