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Giantess
Isca
2009-11-07 . chapter 1
"My hips are too wide for us." I love the use of 'us' here - as if this woman's hips a burden in daily life, childbirth, her lover's life, etc.
DiaRose
2009-11-05 . chapter 1
Aw, that's sad, but I like it. I think it's very well written, and I like how the tone is sort of uncomfortable and awkward to match the subject, that's lovely.
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