this is so intense. it feels kind of like your writing about the end- like the end of everything. we are the sheep and what we are all working for as a society will be the death of us in some way. when you say that the dark in the light has emerged from its hiding it makes me think that the world's facade will fade away and all the flaws and darkness will show. each time i reread this poem i get a new perspective. i don't know if what i infer is what you had in mind when writing it but regardless this is amazing. good work

"Life is a bomb set to detonate." I love this line - it's so thought-provoking and blunt. :)

I have no idea whatsoever what this is supposed to mean.