aw. it's sa that they broke up.. but now Greg and TJ can be a couple :DD
Good chapters! I liked them both!!

kristoff is the name of my teacher thats creepy...

poor kid

Hello. I just wanted to tell you I lve this story, I think it should turn out interesting... but... I do have a few qualms about the way it is written.
I don't like the way it's in all those differnet points of view. For easily confused people such as I, it is hard to follow. And the couple are another thing. You completely lost me there. As for the characters, I'm not even sure who they are... Just thought I would maybe tell you what I was thinking, as a constructive criticism type thing. :)

I'm way too in love with this story for my own health!Kristoff is soo cute! And Theresa's such a sweetie! So what is this crssedressers sexual orintation?? Does he really look like a girl?Would Jake have really beaten up theresa? Haven't eard from Mr. TJ's twin lately.

Oh my gosh!! this was a-mazing :DD
I really want TJ and Greg together, I'm momentarily forgetting about Kristoff and Amelie.
KEEP WRITTING!

oh my freaking jesus! oh my gosh its giving me heart problems too and I;m trying to get breath back in lungs! I've got this dopey smile on my face! Wow can you say amazing?? I love this so much!! zkristoff and Amelie are just thought in the dark resses of my mind at the moment all I want is for Greg and TJ to be together! I feel like a fan girl lolz! I'm on my hands and knees begging you to update like now!PLEASE!?

:D great story! I hope you update soon! So much suspense~!

Yay! you updated. :)
I liked this chapter..just like the rest of the story!!
I hope you reach your record soon!!

All I have to say for this chapter...ew, lady gaga. lol.
It was a good chapter though.
keep it up!
Can't wait to read more!

HAha you used my favorite word in this chapter, "ridonkulous"
O0o0o Theresa is gonna get high. lol

This is really good so far :) I like it.
It's kinda sad that is dad dosn't belive he's gay though.
I'm gonna read more so you'll most likley see alot of reviews from me..lol

i think im going to love both of them.

Why hasn't this story gotten more reviews? I am shocked! The plot line is hilarious! Because I am so happy to finally find a good story that has potential, I'll be giving you a review-- cuz you're humor is in my street >:) I could relate to this story cuz my bro is g*y, but he's not one of those kind of guys who dates a lot of people. He's sincere and kind and generous-- one of a kind and i love him bunches :D.

First of all, love love love the characters. About Taylor..."He was running his fingers over the picture of Taylor Lautner, in one of the magazines.I didn't know if it was acting or him being sincere; and that was scary."-- LOL! I LOVE YOU!

Overall, I thought this was a great start to the story. My only concern is the dialogue. don't change a thing, but just remember that when someone is talking (and that you decide to put description after it) put a COMMA instead of a period. It's a minor/fixable problem ^^. And also make sure you place a new paragraph when another person is talking. Some of of your paragraphs are clumped together and it makes it difficult for me to read. Also, what race are the family? When you said Toshiro, I thought they were Japanese, then when I looked at the last name (which isin the end) it was white-ish? Anyway, that's it

Loves ya bunches of oats and thanks for sharing this story! I will defenitely read chapter 2 when i get back home from school.

PS- if you have time, please review my story heart to heart in return! Thanks!

-Agent