Very lovely poem! You should write more! It's a lot like fanfiction, but with less limitations... I hope you like it here! =D

Such a pretty idea, but sad too. :)
I like it, it's well done. :)

This is great! I like it a lot. The flower could also be interpreted as a person longing for attention. Fantastic. Please write more!

~Anna~ ^_^

No! You should update here more than you update there XD! (sorry, just read your profile)

I liked the message your short poem states. Everything is so... inorganic you know? Computers, technology, blah blah blah, no one really stops/slows down and absorb the nature around them. It's a shame really :(. Great job.

Oh and also, for criticism"

"They don’t care like they did."-- I think the better words would be "they don't care LIKE THEY USED TO" ^^

Overall, great job! Welcome to Ficpress and i hope you enjoy your stay :D

-P.S-- if you have time, please review my story Heart to Heart. i would love to hear from you! Tee hee

-Agent