"But here I am, paralysed." God, I love the irony of this line, and the way in which it connects perfectly to the one above it.

"Someday I'll bite myself out of these ropes which bind me." A very powerful message. Wow.

hi!

I really love every verse, the 1 is amazing about how life isn't always the same and the 2 and 3 are like being left but keeping hope, it's a great message by the way and I think the last verse is cute, I felt it like there's still innocence.

An interesting and innovative style, and I really liked it! The vocabulary and the way you used it stunned me and it was so fantastic!! Really good job!

Dweller-Of-The-Past

I realy like the order of the poem, and the overall idea of time, change, and forgivness... nice work!

really beautiful. truely. And yes ofcourse I remember you :) I'm well, been really busy lately. Haven't found the time to write songs for awhile. I did however recently co-write a play, and am writing a sitcom with a friend, and working as a full time scientist haha. good times. How've you been?

Wow.
You said I write well? Have you SEEN your stuff?

So much anger and power and everything wrapped into one. It's so bitter/hopeful at the same time; I always think those poems are the best.

:) i loved the long winding sentences and the flowly piercing words within them, keep writing!

This whole piece was amazing! I especially liked the first line in the first stanza, the 4th and 5th line of the second stanza, but the las line in the final stanza is what I love most. Job well done. Keep it Up!

I love how you've worked this out! I especially love the last verse, "Planting the seeds of any new dreams within my heart", gotta love those lines.
Also, I'd like to say that I'm sorry that I haven't reviewed any more, because I do have you on author alert, but I don't receive any alerts anymore, I don't get any e-mails if I've been reviewed myself either. I've sent several e-mails to the support people of this site, but they don't answer me. So, that's why, and sorry again!
Anyway, amazing writing!

THAT.
WAS.
AMAZING/BEAUTIFUL/INDESCRIBABLE.

Keep it up! Love the way everything was described! :)

~Little Miss Cullen Cutie~

Love this line and idea:
Planting the seeds of any new dreams within my heart,

And this is a wonderful poem!
The last part is my favourite. :) Bravo!

Wow, that was really awesome. Write more, please.

Wow. I'm speechless...