What finesse, what rhythm, control and style! You can sense it from the very first verse, the vivid image of structure, rhythm and perfect rhymes. Short, lucid, thought-provoking, a little Poe peering out from behind the curtain with some Milton on the outside. Splendid writing, my good man. I wish earnestly to see more of this quality come from your pen.

wow, it starts out all butterflies and happy then it gets dark, dismal and demented, cool poem!






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