YAY! I want more...! As much as I LOVE the original version of this story I'm loving the novel version even more. In answer to the question you asked me on facebook, NO! Kitty's name should remain since that's pretty much a canon thing for this story. Can't wait till you introduce the world..*sigh* I miss getting PHONE CALLS and BRAGGING RIGHTS! Anywho, WRITE WOMAN WRITE AND UPDATE ASAP
Mucho loves, hugs and stay away from drugs ;)
~Fin

just started reading, figured i'd throw in a quick comment: it's really cool! i'm interested in the characters! i never read this is as a fanfic but it's kind of cool to try and spot the connections. haha.

rofl. poison skin. Hey, this is really good! keep it up!

YAY! Ok, so was it a typo when Casper calls Seth "TY" near the end when trying to get him to leave the room?
I'm seriously loving the new stuff you've put in here and can't wait for all the new twists and turns you've planned =D
WRITE WOMAN WRITE AND UPDATE ASAP!
Loves and mucho hugs
~Fin

So someone found their muse!! Love it you xmen freak haha It's a great plot and I like the characters can't wait to see what happens next!

Ro is like Rogue! Love this chapter! Can't wait for your next :)

And the plot thickens haha Ro is my favorite! lol so far at least. I'm excited to see what happens next! And who is this Ethan!? Update soon girl

YAY! It's funny even with the subtle changes applied to the story I still find myself remembering all the lovely details of the old story. Hehehe I like how you made E a "demon man" instead of a Canadian...I was wondering how you were going to remedy that. =D Still as always WONDERFUL UPDATE! now WRITE WOMAN WRITE AND UPDATE ASAP! =D I love you and miss you dearly and if you would ever call me back or answer your phone I can get bragging rights instead of the Verizon lady.

LOVES AND MUCHO HUGS
~Fin

finally :) loving Ro!

hmm...

I like the characters, well sort of, but think i need to read to get a grasp on them :)

take care

Cool. :)

I like this, I mean to place the emphasisis on like in that sentence by the way.

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also i loved this line " A desk was behind her, her own desk, abandoned in the throws of deep thought, where only her window served as a comfort." excpt i figure you meant throes instead of throws.

Plus, I love how the fact that the headmistress is blind was uncovered. =]

Ro like Rogue - how devastating! Very interested in seeing where this is going!

For starters, the names for each of the boys fit them well. I was a little "if-y" about the use of Casper when you already have another story up using the same name, but I suppose you'll be doing that once again later with names such as Delancy, April, Lysander, ect.
As for the Syrens, I was very happy to see you use the full names so early on in the story. I adore that Finn and Ro have such other-worldly names while Katherine is so obviously from "the Earthen side." Everything simply falls into place like this and, I must say, I rather enjoy it.
For my critique, well, Rae and I have talked to you about this many a time before...Ro's powers, invincibility AND inhuman strength? Although it's MarySue city with her, I'm just glad you gave her the curse. it even things out, if only a little.
As always, Jons, I can't wait to read the rest (even though I kind of already have. ;) ) I love you!

YOU MADE MY DAY AGAIN! =D
Ok, so can't say I'm surprised with the name changes for the boys although I chuckled a little at Wayne's name knowing who it was before you even explained it. You're giving Ro the curse to start off with? Unexpected twist but I'm curious how it will all play out. I'm sure the people who read the reviews (such as Kit and myself) are probably wondering how or why I know such things...but it's all good. I can't wait for the next chapter! WRITE WOMAN WRITE AND UPDATE NOW!

Mucho Loves
~Fin

P.S. I like how you used all our full names =D

sounds like it will be a really good story! I can't wait to read the next chapter! :D