|Reviews for there's so much less to say|
| thinking.about.thinking 2/16/10 . chapter 1
I love these lines:
"so I feed the words I’d give you
to letters and the internet."
| tonight we bloom 11/28/09 . chapter 1
| Midnight In Eden 11/14/09 . chapter 1
Simple and brutal. I can definitely empathise with the sentiments here. One thing though, perhaps use an ellipsis at the end of the second stanza? It feels like it should trail off and that would be a good indication of such.
Oh and do you mean "your" on the first line of the second stanza?
Nicely done though.