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thinking.about.thinking 2/16/10 . chapter 1I love these lines: "so I feed the words I’d give you to letters and the internet." .thinking |
tonight we bloom 11/28/09 . chapter 1simplistically beautiful. |
Midnight In Eden 11/14/09 . chapter 1Simple and brutal. I can definitely empathise with the sentiments here. One thing though, perhaps use an ellipsis at the end of the second stanza? It feels like it should trail off and that would be a good indication of such. Oh and do you mean "your" on the first line of the second stanza? Nicely done though. Midnight |