I liked it. It kinda reminded me of a Dashboard Confessional song (and they're one of my favourite bands!). :D Good work

wow. The tune Give You Back by Vertical Horizon comes to mind. The last 2 lines are chilling (pun unintended) but I like it.

aw, I like this mixing, it's like wanting to love and not at the same time, cool song.

its beautiful but has a bit of an abrupt ending but still very beautiful.

Beautiful imagery, very sad, very enjoyable read. :)