|Reviews for long lost and forgotten|
| 403 Forbidden 11/5/09 . chapter 1
This is really beautiful, the way you showed so much in so few words. The way this flows in a certain way all the way through is really good, kind of haunting in a way. I especially like the lines "in every dream and nightmare/with the same old empty promises?" because it sounds really powerful, especially at the end. Great poem.