Of the three in this collection, this one is the best. It has the most revealed emotion, and I absolutely love the cohesion and structure. The word choice is really intelligent too, and I love the chorus. The only line I really have a problem with is in the very last (stanza?)"no more vicarious enchantments of the world". It is fine, I guess, but I don't think it matches well with the rest of the song.

I would love to see the sheet music/theme for this.
Good Job, Its good you are back.

I like the whole message about there's hope.

I like this since it's true, it's hard to know what's the bye.

I like how personal and honest is this.