 xxxrebelangelxxx 2009-11-06 . chapter 1That in my opinion was a realy good piece of writing and really enjoyable and funny to read even though it wasn't a short story. I think that if someone where to ask what writing really was, this paragraph would sum it up nicely. It's not a short story, yet it is at the same time,because...okay it might not have a plot or a storyline, it might not tell what happened, to who it happened to, why did it happen, what did they do about it, but it's someones thoughts presented on paper that creates a story, tells their ideas and thoughts in an entertaining way, in a enjoyable and way that engages the readers and sort of creates this whole new thing. overall i think that, it was a really nice to read this pice of writing. keep up the good work! (thought i would give a bit of encouragement) |