Aww..this was a touching and heartwarming little tale. It was so cute seeing those two kids and their strong friendship with one another...all expressed through colored liquid :) lovely.

Very creative, Fang. The original idea and metaphors served the story well, and the imagery was beautiful.

Good job and good luck in WCC this month!

There were a few lovely lovely sentences!!

"Young fingers plunged into lukewarm paint"

"There they were, hand in hand, with a blue sun on their backs, ready to face the darkness together"

Wonderful!!

Oh that's beautiful! i loved the line "liquid chocolate eyes turned inward to a world that no one had ever seen before" and the ending was awesome!