Zombies! I totally have planed a z day action plan with my bro and am always wondering what could go wrong. Its a great topic that is extremely popular lately and will always have diehard zombie fans...like me. Minor spelling errors and it gets a bit wordy at some points (with all those extra bits of info in parenthesis) but otherwise I love it! I can't wait to see how this comes together in the next piece.

Some other suggestions is when Max kills Dave he just does it and walks away like 'oh no biggie it was just a zombie'. Maybe the first time he should freak... just a tad.