A sweet song, I'd like to hear it. :)

Don't take this as a put-down of your singing/guitar playing, as I mean it as praise for your skill at putting music into your lyrics and their arrangement. Reading the song, I could feel the bittersweet melody and tender undertones. It was a nice change from the way many modern bands' playing is so loud that I can catch only a few words even when the singers scream at the top of their lungs. My only criticism is the downbeat ending. I would have liked to be left with the hope that the singer still believed she had a chance of catching her true love when he fell.